My Weekend
On the weekend we went to the Kelly Tarltons.
My favourite part was when I saw the stripy fishes pass by.
I saw a Turtle and I felt sad because I saw a video on
YouTube and it was about a Turtle. The Turtle was on land
and it was struggling to get to the ocean.
My favourite part was when I saw the stripy fishes pass by.
I saw a Turtle and I felt sad because I saw a video on
YouTube and it was about a Turtle. The Turtle was on land
and it was struggling to get to the ocean.
Well I saw a lot of sea animals. My favourite animal was
a Penguin because I think it’s special. Shark’s looked
cool. I wanted to ride one and ride a Dolphin. Soon then
I saw a stingray that looked like a kite. I soon then saw
fish that was fat and spiky.
a Penguin because I think it’s special. Shark’s looked
cool. I wanted to ride one and ride a Dolphin. Soon then
I saw a stingray that looked like a kite. I soon then saw
fish that was fat and spiky.
My adventure soon came to an end.
I was sad that I can’t stay any longer.
I had a great day and I wanted to stay but I can't
because I have something else to do.
I was sad that I can’t stay any longer.
I had a great day and I wanted to stay but I can't
because I have something else to do.
Good writing put always put full stops at the end everytime
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